Sunday, 18 January 2015

Blay's Song: An Evaluation

In his book, “The World in Six Songs: How the Musical Brain Created Human Nature” (2008), Daniel Levitin identifies six fundamental song functions or types (friendship, joy, comfort, religion, knowledge, and love) and goes on to show how each in its own way has enabled the social bonding necessary for human culture and society to evolve. My own song could be classed as a song of friendship, joy or love as I think many of Levitin’s categories interlink.

My main lyrical inspirations were John Lennon and Lea Michele. John Lennon once said “Songwriting is about getting the demon out of me.” (Flavorwire, 2012.)  Though my own experience is very different, I feel a certain empathy with Lennon as I know he writes songs for his mother who passed away. I chose to write a song in memory of my best friend, who I lost in a car accident five months ago. Writing about something so personal to me was daunting at first and I spent a lot of the creative process frustrated because I couldn’t put my feelings into words and  I also regularly found myself getting upset as it’s still so raw for me. However, I think pouring all my feelings and so much emotion into my song brought me closure and just made my work more passionate.

I started out by writing down all of my feelings, which I eventually compiled into my first verse. I also made a separate list of personal jokes and memories that I shared with Rachel, which became my second verse. In an interview with ‘Billboard’ in 2014, Lea Michele said the following about her song “If You Say So” which is a tribute to her fiancĂ© who died in 2013. “Listening to it, it's therapeutic and difficult. It will always represent the most devastating thing that's ever happened to me in my whole life. But at the same time, music is therapy. It's been therapy for me in the entire grieving process and in my entire life.” (Billboard, 2014)I also feel that writing my song has been therapeutic for me. I think writing about my own experiences makes my song much more emotional. My lyric “It still makes me angry that, we don’t know who to blame” was inspired by Ed Sheeran’s lyric from ‘Small Bump’ “Torn from life. Maybe you were needed up there but we're still unaware as why” (Plus. 2011) and is about questioning why that person was taken when it wasn’t there time.

When creating my melody I enlisted the help of my boyfriend, who is thankfully a musician and also my guitar tutor. I had written a ballad and so I knew the mood and the feel I wanted my song to have, I just didn't know the chords to create this. Together we tried out several chord progressions until I was happy we had one which fitted the lyrics. As it’s a ballad it’s written in ¾ timing, like a waltz and is reminiscent of Aerosmith’s ‘I Don’t Wanna Miss A Thing’ which has a similar feel. The song benefits from the slower pace and the lyrics are clearer. It also differs from the stereotypical 4/4 pop song timing. When it came to composing the melody of the song, I chose to use chords of G, D, Em and Bm for the majority, with slight variations, altered lyrics and a key change for my final chorus. I did this so that the melody of the song remained simplistic and consistent and allowed for the lyrics to take precedence. The majority of the vocals were my own voice but I thought having Luke coming in on the bridge and chorus brought a new dynamic to the song and our contrasting voices sounded better together. It also made way for a harmony.

I recorded the song using Cubase, which is professional recording software. For the vocals I used a Shure SM-57 microphone which is a dynamic microphone with a cardiod polar pattern – meaning the area around the microphone picks up sound. Bon Iver recorded the whole of his ‘For Emma, Forever Ago’ album on an SM-57. It’s a good microphone because it has a large frequency range, from bass up to vocals. The guitar and microphone were fed through an M-audio fast track 2. When editing my song I duplicated the guitar tracks and equalised them differently to create a richer sound. We then panned the alternate tracks left and right. The vocals were gated and then equalised before we compressed them and finally ran them through a reverb effects channel. Gating them removes unwanted sounds at quieter parts of the track but still lets main audio through. Equalising removes unwanted frequencies, bringing clarity and tone to both the instruments and vocals. Compressing ensures the audio doesn’t peak and create digital distortion.

To improve the song, I would have spent more time recording the vocals. My voice wasn’t at its strongest at the time of recording and I know that I could have sounded better. I also would have taken the time to ensure that Luke and I were singing the same thing, as we recorded separately we each put our own spin on the song, for example Luke held notes that I didn’t and vice versa. This was also an advantage however as when Luke dropped down a key and I automatically went higher, it created a nice harmony. I would also like to experiment with piano chords as I like the sombre feel a piano can bring to a ballad and it would have given the piece a classical element to it.

Bibliography

Levitin, D (2008) The World In Six Songs. USA: Dutton Penguin. p.7

Hawking, T. (2012). 25 Great Songwriters on the Art of Songwriting. Available: http://flavorwire.com/306045/25-great-songwriters-on-the-art-of-songwriting. Last accessed 16/01/14

Ayers, M. (2014). Lea Michele Q&A. Available: http://www.billboard.com/articles/columns/pop-shop/5923073/lea-michele-interview-louder-album-cory-monteith-glee. Last accessed 16/01/14

Discography

Lea Michele, "If You Say So". Louder. 2014

Ed Sheeran, "Small Bump", Multiply, 2013

Aerosmith, “I Don’t Wanna Miss A Thing”, Nine Lives, 1997



Blay's Song; Lyrics

Blay's Song - Lyrics

G                                             D
I wish I had just told you, every single day.

Em                                                          Bm
Just how much you meant to me, before you went away.

G                                                   D
You know my eyes still water, at the mention of your name.

Em                                                                 Bm
And it still makes me angry, that we don't know who to blame.

C                                       D                      G                                Em
Losing you was unforgettable, and there's no comfort in the alcohol.

G                                                           D
It's strange you not being here, when we're all in pain.

Em                                                                   Bm
I've not quite come to terms that I'll not see you again.

G                                                     D
The memories I have of you sometimes bring a smile.

                     Em                                            Cadd9
But there's nothing I wouldn't do to have you back a while.


G                                                             Em
The moment you were taken my heart split in two,

  Cadd9                                                          D                          (repeat chorus chords)
One side was filled with memories, the other died with you.
I often lay awake, when the world is fast asleep,
Take a walk down memory lane whilst tears roll down my cheek.
Remembering you is easy, I do it every day,
But missing you is heartache that never goes away.

I have so much to tell you, now you're not around.                                         
But instead I have to tell it, to a stone in the ground.
I hear you laugh, how could I forget.
That day we got lost in the Lake District,

Losing you was unforgettable, and there's no comfort in alcohol.

No regrets when the waiter was a dick,
All because, he wouldn’t serve you Pimms.
And the times we spent training, lifting weights in the gym.
We were never much good and it's hard to reminisce,

The moment you were taken my heart split in two,
 One side was filled with memories, the other died with you.
 I often lay awake, when the world is fast asleep,
 I take a walk down memory lane whilst tears roll down my cheek.
 Remembering you is easy, I do it every day,
But missing you is heartache that never goes away.

A                                                             F#m
The moment you were taken my heart was split in two,                                    (key change)

         D                                                                    E
One side was filled with memories, the other died with you.
I often lay awake, when the world is fast asleep,
Take a walk down memory lane whilst tears roll down my cheek.
You’ll always be in my heart and there you will remain,
Life may go on but it’ll never ever be the same

Thursday, 15 January 2015

Creating My Song

Once I put my mind to it the lyrics came easily enough. I was writing about personal experience and so I started by recounting memories and feelings and then began to try and make rhyming couplets. Once I was happy with my verses I began my chorus, I found this slightly harder as I felt a bit like I was repeating myself which was very frustrating.
My song is about my friend, who I lost in a car accident this past summer. It actually helped to just write about my feelings, which is what the first verse is about. My chorus is more based on my own grief but I think anyone who’s lost someone can relate to the pain you feel. My second verse is more personal as I wrote from memories that I shared with Rachel and our private jokes. When creating my melody I enlisted the help of my boyfriend, who is thankfully a musician and also my guitar tutor. I had written a ballad and so I knew the mood and the feel I wanted my song to have, I just didn't know the chords to create this. Together we tried out several chord progressions until I was happy we had one which fitted the lyrics. As it’s a ballad it’s written in ¾ timing, like a waltz and is reminiscent of Aerosmith’s ‘I Don’t Wanna Miss A Thing’ which has a similar feel. The song benefits from the slower pace and the lyrics are clearer. It also differs from the stereotypical 4/4 pop song timing.

We recorded the song using Cubase, which is professional recording software. For the vocals we used a Shure SM-57 microphone which is a dynamic microphone with a cardiod polar pattern – meaning the area around the microphone picks up sound.Bon Iver recorded the whole of his ‘For Emma, Forever Ago’ album, featuring the song ‘Skinny Love’, on an SM-57. It’s a good microphone because it has a large frequency range, from bass up to vocals. The guitar and microphone were fed through an M-audio fast track 2.

When editing my song we duplicated the guitar tracks and equalised them differently to create a richer sound. We then panned the alternate tracks left and right. The vocals were gated and then equalised before we compressed them and finally ran them through a reverb effects channel. Gating them removes unwanted sounds at quieter parts of the track but still lets main audio through. Equalising removes unwanted frequencies, bringing clarity and tone to both the instruments and vocals. Compressing ensures the audio doesn’t peak and create digital distortion.

So hear it is, my first ever song!

Going It Without My Guitar

As I don't consider myself at all musically talented, I was fairly certain writing my own song was going to be an impossible task. When looking for inspiration I stumbled across an article about writing without an instrument - as I don't play an instrument I found it quite useful.

"Let your mind wander, In order to really get in the songwriting mood, try thinking about something different. The potential of your brain when it’s free to imagine, wander and wonder is far greater than when it’s limited to your knowledge of the guitar, mandolin or whatever. Even if you’re a virtuoso.
So put down your guitar and just imagine something from your recent past. We all live stories everyday, but usually they just pass us by. Stop to think about something that’s happened in the past couple of days that made you feel something. Really think yourself back inside that situation – and then imagine the music that might be playing in the background.
If you really can’t think of anything, go somewhere. Take a stroll down the high street… go to the park. Who cares if it’s 10.30 at night, you’re an adult!" - Songwriting Ltd.. (2014)


Songwriting Progression

Before I started writing I listened to other material with the same themes as mine. For example; John Lennon, who wrote songs about losing his mother and coming to terms with that loss and also George Harrison who wrote ‘All Those Years Ago’ after John Lennon was assassinated, in his memory. I also looked at Status Quo who wrote ‘A Year’ 12 months after Alan Lancaster’s friend passed away. I especially looked at Sia and Lea Michele as they have both written material after their boyfriends died.

I found that these songwriters write with compassion and they feel what other people feel. Which makes for a song that people can find themselves in. The melody and lyrics of the songs are very sincere and written with great passion, something I wanted to replicate.

I noted down lyrics with resonance to me, which I took inspiration from in my own song.

“Tell me it was just a dream, August 7, 4:15” – Jon Bon Jovi, “August 7, 4:15”. Destination Anywhere. 1997

“Torn from life. Maybe you were needed up there but we're still unaware as why” - Ed Sheeran, “Small Bump”. Multiply. 2013

“I would’ve stayed up with you all night. Had I known how to save a life” – The Fray, “How To Save A Life”, 2005.

“ I can't get away from the burning pain, I lie awake.” -  Lea Michele, “If You Say So”, Louder, 2014.


Friday, 9 January 2015

Group Assessment Review

Working as a group brought an exciting element to our work because I was working with new people with fresh ideas. Through the rehearsal process we used this to our advantage and constantly developed our ideas creatively, helping one another when devising our arrangements. This made the work enjoyable which is always a beneficial atmosphere. It also meant we were willing to rehearse more often and achieve a higher standard piece.

We held a discussion on the theme of our performance. In his book, The World in Six Songs: How the Musical Brain Created Human Nature” (2008), Daniel Levitin identifies six fundamental song functions or types (friendship, joy, comfort, religion, knowledge, and love) then shows how each in its own way has enabled the social bonding necessary for human culture and society to evolve. After researching this, the group settled on a loose theme of friendship. We insured that we thought of human culture and society whilst researching songs. I personally made a list of songs which reflected current society and linked in with our friendship theme.

For the beginning of the rehearsal process we split into pairs, each choosing one song out of the three we aimed to perform. Natalie and I worked on Passenger's "Let Her Go". I played guitar and sung vocals whilst Nat played keyboard. However, when we brought this back to the group we found we were limited as to what we could do with the song. It is originally performed by a male vocalist and the key was too low. Also Passenger is a solo artist and as we were a group we wanted a song that had more room for experimentation. This led to us changing songs to Outkast's "Hey Ya" which was higher pitched and allowed us to create a two-part harmony. The chords for “Hey Ya” were however more complex than “Let Her Go” and because I found it a challenge, though rewarding, I knew that I wouldn’t be able to learn the song in time as a learning guitarist.




Our other songs included an original piece, composed by Reece, entitled "Young Forever". It was in our "Young Forever" performance that I showcased my second skill which was guitar, as I primarily consider myself a singer. Although I only played the block chords of the chorus as I struggled with the full strumming pattern, I have come a long way since starting the module.  I was happy that I could play enough to benefit the piece and add an extra dimension to the performance. We opened our set with "Young Forever" which is all about the invincibility you feel as a young teenager, experiencing everything for the first time and then reminiscing over this, which is rooted in human culture and society and in keeping with our Levitin research.



Chloe and Jess created an arrangement of Miley Cyrus' "We Can't Stop" and Jessie J's "PriceTag", which is about being care free, partying and not caring who sees or about the money. This arrangement worked well as again we used varied dynamics which brought a new energy to the piece, which I think carried over well in performance. We changed the original tempo of the song to reflect the reminiscent theme and we diverted from the original instruments used in ‘We Can’t Stop’ which is mainly synthesisers and drum machines, and used a piano.



I feel our performance went relatively well, when working in a large group there's always going to be small slip ups but I think we handled these very well and recovered professionally. I personally noticed during "Hey Ya" that our timing had been lost due to one of our group members being unaware of the time signature and unsure of the vocal melody. I took a risk coming in earlier than we had rehearsed, however it paid off and I brought the performance back. I think this demonstrates my musical awareness during performance. I did also make a mistake in my solo lines during the second verse which meant Reece had to improvise with the guitar part, again we dealt with this professionally and we carried on. I was happy with my performance overall, I didn't have any issues with pitch and tonality, which had been an issue in rehearsal as I was singing the harmony line. 

Finally, I think the way we set out our performance space benefitted us, everyone was visible to the audience and everyone could be heard clearly. The only thing I would consider changing is the grouping of the singers. Chloe and I were lead vocalists but because we were also playing instruments we were sat away from the other vocalists which I think is partially to blame for the as aforementioned timing going wrong during performance. I would also re-arrange the vocalist’s positions based on their range as I think Sophie who is a soprano standing between Donna who sings Bass and Natalie who is an Alto, caused pitching problems. If we had more time or we were to perform again, I would rehearse ‘Hey Ya’ more as due to the time constraints and the late change in song we were perhaps under-rehearsed. I would also spend more time ensuring that all members of the band were confident with the words as I think several people held back in performance due to a lack of confidence.